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p. Chester Beatty Song Cycle 1 love poem 7 - notes

1) Alliteration seven...yesterday - first use of sn.t (sister) also 13 and 20 - first use of seven also 20 ... Syllable count 9

2) First use of x3i.t (illness) also 8 - first use of aq (enter, here in intensive form) also 11 and 15 ... Syllable count 8

3) End rhyme with line 5 - first use of xa=i (flesh/members/body/self) also 17 ... Syllable count 9

4) Alliteration body...self ... Syllable count 6

5) End rhyme with line 3 - repetition of -w- - first use of n=i (to me) also 9 13 and 14 - first use of wr (great) also 14 - first use of iw (come) also 19 ... Syllable count 8

6) End rhyme with line 7 - line 6 ib-i n plays against line 7 bn - first use of ib-i also 12 - first use of pXr (prescription/remedy) also 13 ... Syllable count 10

7) End rhyme with line 6, also line 6 ib-i n plays against line 7 bn ... Syllable count 11

8) Second use of x3i.t (illness) also 2 - repetition of -w- - repetition of -i- ... Syllable count 10

9) First use of p3 nti (the which) also 10 and 12 - repetition of -i- - first use of s‘nx also 12 - second use of n=i (to me) also 5 13 and 14 ... Syllable count 11

10) Short line, second occurrence of p3 nti (the which) also 9 and 12 ... Syllable count 7

11) Second use of ‘q (entry) also 2 (intensive) and 15 - first use of pr (exit) also 20 ... Syllable count 10

12) Third use of p3 nti (the which) also 9 and 10 - repetition of s‘nx also 9 - second use of ib-i also 6 ... Syllable count 8

13) Second use of sn.t (sister) also 1 and 20 - third use of n=i (to me) also 5 9 and 14 - second use of pXr (prescription/remedy) also 6 ... Syllable count 10

14) Second use of wr (great) also 5 - fourth use of n=i (to me) also 5 9 and 13 ... Syllable count 9

15) Third use of ‘q (entry) also 2 (intensive) and 11 ... Syllable count 10

16) First use of kA (so/then) also 18 - repetition of -i- ... Syllable count 8

17) Second use of xa=i (flesh/members/body/self) also 3 ... Syllable count 9

18) Second use of kA (so/then) also 16 ... Syllable count 7

19) Second use of iw (come) also 5 - alliteration embrace...drives away...upon me - repetition of -i- ... Syllable count 12

20) Second use of seven also 1 - third use of sn.t (sister) also 13 and 20 - second use of pr (exit) also 11 ... Syllable count 9

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